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It It Love
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
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When I am in your arms,
there's no place I'd rather be.
At the end of each day,
I look forward to you calling me.
With one look from your eyes,
all my problems disappear.
These feelings I hade for you,
in fear of being a toy.
I want you to know me,
and all I hide.
I want to get to know you,
and how you feel insde.
You're like a dream come true,
you're all I've ever wanted for.
Now that you're here with me,
I'll never ask for more.
Shadow, as long as you stay true,
I will be here...loving you.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-13 12:30:00]
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Re: It It Love
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by Roshie on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 01:05:17 PM AEST
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| I loved it! Beautifully written. =) |
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Re: It It Love
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 01:38:44 PM AEST
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I made a tiny mistake on the title of this poem it is suposed to be "Is It Love" sorry about that.
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Re: It It Love
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:14:34 AM AEST
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This is a very lovely expession of what wanting the one's love feels like Candice.
Well written, apart from the title hehehe, don't worry about that, it's the thoughts and feelings behind the words that count. And there are plenty of good ones here!
I have to go to bed now, it's 2.20am here and I have an IT exam tomorrow, so I'll speak to ya again very soon. Goodnight Candice, keep well my friend.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: It It Love
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:21:51 AM AEST
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| And no dreaming of eight legged sandwiches now Candice, ya hear! Heheyukk!! |
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Re: It It Love
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:31:23 AM AEST
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Dean, Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you like this poem.
I was getting read to go my self. I have just gotten some inspiration and I need to go write now. In case you were wondering, my inspiration was because of the movie Jaws. One of my favorite movies, and I really like sharks, they are my favorite animal. I know it sounds a little odd but, that's who I am.
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Re: It It Love
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:33:25 AM AEST
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Dean, you just had to remind me of that didn't you. Ewwww gross!!!! I had forgotten about that too. Thanks a lot.
ShadowsCloud:) |
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Re: It It Love
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by pixie on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:00:22 AM AEST
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that was very beautiful,
pix xx |
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