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Chase Your Mind
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:19:57 PM in AEST
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Back to the beginning.
Stop - rewind, back to the beginning again
Relive that very first, worst nightmare
Keep trying to slice through that vein
(And the blade cuts deep, but not as deep as the pain)
And this time the pain's here to stay
And the rain's come out to play (again)
Stifled breaths, and dancing, in this masochistic way
Persue the fraying edge of your world, again
Throw everything out of proportion
Smear the bloodied tears across your face
Throw your head down in shame; disgrace
Disregard every reason to enjoy life today, everyday
Everything to lose, nothing to gain (again)
Smudge everything into distortion
Chase every inch of sanity away
Copyright ©
afraid_of_fear
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2004-10-05 12:19:57]
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:22:47 PM AEST
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a very intresting dark write,I really liked this one,
pixie xx |
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:05:10 PM AEST
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This is almost maddening . . dusky and overcast.
An extremely good write. |
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:05:45 PM AEST
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This is almost maddening . . dusky and overcast.
An extremely good write.
~*~ Valentine ~*~
. . .Rose. |
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:27:42 PM AEST
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bad ass man bad ass...you did a great job...very interesting in how you wrote it...i loved it bro!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:36:09 PM AEST
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| excellent write. keep it up. |
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:13:36 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it! |
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:06:51 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, was freaky read, but well worth it. |
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:25:54 AM AEST
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I don't even know what to say about that one...i'm speechless. That was amazing. It was so deep and intense...I was just like WOAH. I think I'm gonna look up what poems you've put on this site and read them cuz this one is sooooo good.
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by arden on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:36:56 PM AEST
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damn girl. wow. this was powerful. loved how its written and the feelings it expresses. loved this write char. 5 stars
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:08:27 PM AEST
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(And the blade cuts deep, but not as deep as the pain)
A wonderful, gripping poem and the above
line was so true. I loved it all and the last line
really summed up the poem beautifully. Once
again I loved this... thnx for sharing.
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Re: Chase Your Mind
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:22:10 PM AEST
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This was very good, you'd like my latest one i think.
Our styles are similar, well sort of. |
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