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Nothing
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 09:23:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You're nothing to me
You're dead in my eyes
A part of my world
That was nothing but lies
All those time you hurt me
Hurting so bad, I just had to cry
I killed you in me
You might as well die
You're nothing to me
Not like you were
Not that long ago
But you had to change
And now it's all over
You're nothing to me
You're dead in my eyes
A part of my world
That was nothing but lies
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2004-10-05 21:23:00]
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Re: Nothing
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 09:57:18 PM AEST
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interesting write, i hope things get better for you
l8r
Ninja Tycz |
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Re: Nothing
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:05:52 PM AEST
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| just make sure the dead doesnt come back to haunt you... |
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Re: Nothing
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by hoist1atca on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:25:25 AM AEST
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Good poem-
I like the part about "being a part of my world that was nothing but lies"
I only wish I had your ability to remove the pain which burdens my soul with the passing of each day.
Someday maybe... |
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