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Of Chasms and Fire
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Chasms
So many ways these chasms form
Too few are the ways they can be filled
Mine can only be filled by someone like you
By you perhaps but I am not sure
That is what you want
So many ways these wounds are made
Without the use of a knife or any blade
It takes so long for them to heal
If they ever do
You’re A Fire That Buns
And brands my soul
I feel the warmth of your flame as it
Washes away the imbrued marks
That my tears have made
You’re A Fire That Burns
Just like love always will
And like love
You melt the ice that traps my heart
Nothing feels as sweetly as you do
When our bodies warm the cold universe
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Re: Of Chasms and Fire
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:55:36 PM AEST
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awsome write, i love it alot
l8r
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Re: Of Chasms and Fire
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:16:10 PM AEST
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| amazing write. =] |
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Re: Of Chasms and Fire
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by Soulless on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:01:43 AM AEST
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Your words are simply spun into gold. I love this piece!
I was also drawn to the title.
'chasms of fire'
WOW! |
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Re: Of Chasms and Fire
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:14:08 AM AEST
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| Awesome and sensual poem, thouraly enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Of Chasms and Fire
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by Lee on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:52:51 AM AEST
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| There is strong imagery in this poem, good use of free verse and brief use of rhymed verse. |
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