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Bag of broken Smiles
Contributed by
Soulless
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:55:39 PM in AEST
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Begging and pleading
Look into my eyes
Still you know the truth
This is the life without lies
There is nothing you can float on
Everyone is here
Everything is real
I cant pretend to love you
Drop me off this pedestal
I cant hide anymore
Forget it all
I wont live like this anymore
There is nothing you can float on
Waking up lost hopes
Theres no way around
You must face the truth
I never loved you
I was just a peddler selling broken smiles
They warned me but I didnt listen
I have nothing left to give
Just a final smile
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-10-05 23:55:39]
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Re: Bag of broken Smiles
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by blackeyedfriends on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:01:54 AM AEST
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Re: Bag of broken Smiles
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:00:32 AM AEST
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An awesome write, sensitive, and truthful in a way, if you cant show love then what is wrong with friendship? isnt that better than losing them altogether.
Cool poem.
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Re: Bag of broken Smiles
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by emphaticplacebo on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:03:36 AM AEST
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| Really nice write, I liked the flow and the subject matter is something Im sure everyone can relate to. Good job and keep up the nice work |
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Re: Bag of broken Smiles
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:37:27 PM AEST
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wow I loved the title of this poem I wish I
could make titles that just grabbed people by
the face and forcibly made them read the
poem. This was an awesome poem so I am
glad I read it... even though my face is
bruised. I like how you explained what the
poem was about... otherwise I wouldn't have
gotten it, but thats what the best poems are
made of. Once again I enjoyed this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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