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Mexico
Contributed by
blackeyedfriends
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Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 01:57:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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San Deigo
sun baked sombrero
side-effect from a life lived at the sea
some summer side-effect of me
Sitting on my stomach can't stomach,
sitting by the phone
waiting for a call from home
Some down, desert, deserted place
is distance dying
are you crying?
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Re: Mexico
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by Dorian on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:26:26 AM AEST
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verry vivid i was out west this brought some nice flash backs, alot said with a few verses nice flow 2
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Dorian |
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Re: Mexico
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 03:01:13 AM AEST
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Strange poem, yet alluring, still to the last stanza, well cant answer the last but I hope find the answer you someday.
Cool poem. |
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Re: Mexico
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by cottoncandy on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 07:37:53 PM AEST
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| i feel you...great write..i liked the repetition of the letter s. |
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Re: Mexico
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by Kazzy1231 on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 02:44:37 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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