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let me
Contributed by
princesspurty
on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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dark clouds forming in the sky
let me feel
sorrow will be washed away
let it be real
rain falling upon my face
let me be soaked
heart singing foolishly
let me be prevoked
dark clouds moving on
let me see
pain leaving heart alone
let me be
imagine blue sky
let me fly
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2002-11-13 20:30:00]
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Re: let me
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:01:28 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one,
my favorite line was sorrow will
be washed away, that's beautiful
Bravo! Beautiful write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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