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BEATEN
Contributed by
Catalina
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Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:11:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My Body is weak,
& I am always tired
I have lost my soul,
To this body so admired
No strength left,
I will fight no more
Beaten once again,
I have lost this war
How long I wonder,
Will it continue to make me suffer?
Nobody is here to hold me,
Not even my mother
For I am broken,
Take me out of this misery
Scared for it has won,
Emptiness fills me
Copyright ©
Catalina
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2004-10-06 17:11:33]
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Re: BEATEN
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by AsrealTheFallen10 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:20:54 PM AEST
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Your poetry is touching never stop writing!
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Re: BEATEN
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:51:47 PM AEST
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| this was very good, had a good beat and scheme to it, and was written very well. Life is something we can never fully comprehend, just go with the flow, for this reality is only what we percieve it to be, and even if it hurts, continue playing the game |
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Re: BEATEN
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:10:44 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: BEATEN
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:56:42 AM AEST
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Excellenct write.
Blu |
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