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Malus Peior Pessimus
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:40:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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They wait discreetly inside the shadows
Of our victimized thoughts profusely
To cause this pestilence and the sorrow
War is futile, this disease is deadly
Let it take your mind and end this in blood
Nightmares of the night are after your souls
The claim false status as a condition
They are here to consume your feelings whole
In a forged counterfeit reproduction
Of something we just theorize to be true
All we are is butterflies without wings
Weak and waiting for the faces of death
To smile down upon us while angels sing
While evil embezzles our final breath
Know this, darkness always falls upon us
Everything we know to be true is fictitious
The sickness inside of us is growing older
We fear death for it is far beyond the unknown
Yet life hurts far too much, for they devour us
And sometimes, death is all one can really hope for
Malus Peior Pessimum is what we have here
And in life we pray to our false idols for death
Only in death are we free from the sickness
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Re: Malus Peior Pessimus
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:54:57 PM AEST
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| Great write and interesting thought. I liked it. |
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Re: Malus Peior Pessimus
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:59:19 PM AEST
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| very dark, I like that. I cannot wait to read more |
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Re: Malus Peior Pessimus
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:08:03 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Malus Peior Pessimus
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by Kie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:01:46 AM AEST
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Hello Alex it seems such a long time since i've read your work.
I was and am quite impressed with your mind and imagination.
Yes this is dark but it kept me interesting from beginning to end.
Well done.
Kie |
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