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God's Masterpiece
Contributed by
Yellowrose
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Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Life's Masterpiece
In life's magnificent garden
A great artist's work is displayed
The brush strokes of His masterpiece
Is too beautiful to behold
The bright skies painted all colors of blue
With white clouds drifting or peeking through
Majestic mountains, many capped with snow
Rivers, lakes and oceans nestled below
Green grass, various types of shrubs and trees
Polished and set off with the morning dew
Combine with the many plants and flowers
All painted with a different hues
Animals and creatures both big and small
Are viewed as they run, leap or even crawl
But the loveliest features He bestowed
Are His hidden treasures listed below
Angels hovering like bees nearby
Precious jewels that peek through
Gorgeous flower petals beginning to unfold
A cultured pearl hidden from the eye
Last, but not least, humans He creates
Men, women and children alike
In all different colors and shapes
These completes this picture that He paints
Life is the name of His Masterpiece
God our Father is the great artist
Who painted a picture so lively and real
Of a universe full of serenity and peace
Copyright ©
Yellowrose
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2002-11-13 21:30:00]
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by Mystery_Girl on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 09:33:55 PM AEST
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| This is a nice write.....The title got me in...and glad i read it.......Tanya....:-) |
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by Tyes on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 11:16:07 PM AEST
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Great !
Sure God is smiling ! |
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 11:39:08 PM AEST
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| This was such a beautiful write on Gods creations,he will be thankful as so am I for you sharing! Christina |
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by Yellowrose on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 07:38:04 AM AEST
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| Thank you Mystery_Girl for reading my poem "Life's Masterpiece." I really appreciate you taking your time to comment. I will be to your works over the weekend. Thanks again, Yellowrose. |
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by Yellowrose on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 07:41:37 AM AEST
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| Thank youTyes for reading my poem, "God's Masterpiece". Your comment brought a smile to my face. I thank you. I will be to your site this weekend. Yellowrose. |
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by Yellowrose on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 07:45:18 AM AEST
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| Thanks once again for reading another one of my poem, "God's Masterpiece" I will be to your site this week end. Yellowrose. |
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by nightrider on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 09:01:53 AM AEST
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| this is an amazing masterpeice of your own! this is a very beautiful poem that describes a very beautiful point of view. this really gave me something to think about. thanks for writing! |
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Re: God's Masterpiece
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by capergirl_23 on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:44:23 AM AEST
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I think this poem is wonderful. It really does what I think poetry should do. Which is make you feel like you are drifting off into the poem itself. In this case where beauty & serenity is reaching out to the reader and drawing them in. I felt very at peace and at wonder as I read it several times. Again,I think this poem is wonderful. Keep up the great work!!!!!!
Tracey :) |
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