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Tear of Death

Contributed by shadowmaster_045 on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:26:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

maybe new title idk suggest one in a comment

-----acoustic
Every time I let you down I see you frown
Giving up all hope Ive lost you now, IM BREAKING DOWN
----small solo/intro
----Music starts
Verse:
Only you really know whats going on inside my mind
You were the only one that really even had the time
Picking up the pieces, I know theres nothing left
But through it all in my life I KNOW YOU WERE THE BEST
Chorus:
I left myself lying there lost all hope and shed a tear
Like an angel you helped me up and gave me luck and left me love
But every time I let you down I see you frown
Giving up all hope Ive lost you now, IM BREAKING DOWN!
Verse:
Nothings wrong with you its all me Ive let you down
A little piece of me dies every time you frown
If you were to cry it would shatter my soul inside
Chorus:
Every time I let you down I see you frown
Giving Up all hope Ive Lost you now, IM BREAKING DOWN!
Every time I let you down I see you frown
(Take away my breath, suffocation)
Giving up all hope Ive lost you now, IM BREAKING DOWN!
(Im gonna die, I made you cry)
Outro:
EVERY TIME I LET YOU DOWN I SEE YOUR FROWN
IT TAKES AWAY MY BREATH, SUFFOCATING, IM GONNA DIE
GIVING UP ALL HOPE IVE LOST YOU NOW, IM BREAKING DOWN!
IT TAKES AWAY MY BREATH, SUFFOCATING, IM GONNA DIE
Youll always have my love, even though Im gonna die, I made you cry
--------sounds good to the beat of offsprings (cant get my) head around you

Copyright © shadowmaster_045 ... [ 2004-10-06 18:26:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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