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You Are Not The One
Contributed by
Yousef
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Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:54:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You did what no other girl on earth could do
You broke my heart even though my heart was true
Because of you I was about to lose my mind
But now its time to leave all the past behind
I thought Ill never stop until you are mine
But I found that all the time I spent in loving you was just a waste of time
I thought I wont be able to live without you if you are gone
I hope I was wrong, because if Im not, then how am I supposed to carry on
We could have been so good together
We could have made this last forever
I know it might take a life time to forget you
But Im sure that somehow Ill be able to
Its time for me to start from zero once again
And I pray to God that the memory will not remain
I pretend that everything is great, but the truth Im burning from inside
Im burning because I wont see you by my side
All Im trying to do is not feeling pain
But till now all my efforts are gone in vain
You didnt appreciate all the things Ive done
This means one thing and one thing only, that you are not the one
Yousef Hani
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Yousef
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2004-10-06 18:54:46]
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Re: You Are Not The One
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:02:33 PM AEST
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| sounds like my last relationship. an excellent write. |
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Re: You Are Not The One
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:28:48 PM AEST
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| could it be that we all feel the same..pretending we feel one thing when we really feel something else? Great write. Kill me now..I'm so tired...go read my story Need..then you'll see how I really feel... |
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Re: You Are Not The One
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 09:10:23 PM AEST
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| awesome write. its amazing cuz i swear i am going thru the exact same thing. i do hope things get better for you. (and me). so far, ive loved all your poems that ive read. keep writing. you have talent. jenny |
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Re: You Are Not The One
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by Yousef on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:58:00 PM AEST
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| Thanks all for your comments, I really appreciate it. |
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Re: You Are Not The One
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by Jarmen_Kell on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:18:42 AM AEST
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When that happens, what will you do? let go.
I believe that the surest sign that God loves us all is that we have been given free will and freedom of choice. This is the greatest gift one can ever give: freedom! |
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