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what's goin' on
Contributed by
linagalMBfan01
on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:34:57 PM in AEST
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I was sitting here thinking
but all i could think about was you
you tell me your not in love with me
but how could that be true
because when we danced
you held me so close
i could feel your every breath
(chorus)
I just wanna know what's goin on
do you want me or
do you just wanna be friends?
Just let me know baby
so i can stop myself from fallin in love
I just wanna know whats goin on
whenever i'm around you
i feel so good
you made me feel like
there was no one else in the world
(repeat the chorus X2)
there is going to be one more verse and another repeat of the chorus i think
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Re: what's goin' on
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:42:21 PM AEST
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| this is very good, I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: what's goin' on
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:57:35 PM AEST
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| This is great. |
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Re: what's goin' on
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:40:51 PM AEST
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| very nice. =] |
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Re: what's goin' on
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by thumper on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:35:10 PM AEST
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I really liked this!! Who'd a thought, a musician in the family! lol I do think you need to add some more. And maybe a line or two more in the second stanza? Good write, sweetie. Keep on. I likee! (heh heh heh)
Love ya,
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Re: what's goin' on
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by shadowmoon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:47:56 PM AEST
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Good wright last part needs a little work. I know haw you feel love is hard.
Love
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Re: what's goin' on
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by moon_light on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:00:08 PM AEST
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hey heart pritty funny how you've moved on now. i think you shood add alittle bit more emoshon to it i know you have more in thare. and for the end you can go into how you moved on.
love
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Re: what's goin' on
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by Baby_Grl on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:05:05 AM AEST
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Hey grl, really good. I like it alot. I wish I could have thought of that. lol. Dont worry its a good one.
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Re: what's goin' on
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:18:14 PM AEST
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i like it so far it very good by the way whos it about? well g2g bye
DEMON |
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