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Children
Contributed by
waos
on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:56:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Children's eyes are always open,
they can see your hidden pain.
Children's ears always listen,
they hear your wordless tearstain.
They can see your hidden pain,
children will heal with innocent touch.
They hear your wordless tearstain,
even broken they can be your crutch.
Children will heal with innocent touch,
soft and sweet as a butterfly's wings.
Even broken they can be your crutch,
they masterfully pluck and play your heartstrings.
Soft and sweet as a butterfly's wings,
children's ears always listen.
They masterfully pluck and play your heartstrings,
children's eyes are always open.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-10-06 22:56:55]
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Re: Children
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 06:50:49 PM AEST
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To be honest I don't know what the Pantoum
style is, but I liked this poem it was really
good and thoughtful. Sorry I haven't been
reading your poems, but keep on posting!
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Re: Children
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:00:15 PM AEST
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i thought this poem was a success! well done - a nice poem with some lovely worded lines 'Children will heal with innocent touch,
soft and sweet as a butterfly's wings.
Even broken they can be your crutch,
they masterfully pluck and play your heartstrings.'
excellent work!
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