|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
SI(C)NESS
Contributed by
screwup
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
suicidal life
suicidal mind
happiness in head
hard to find
people cutting all around
they think it helps
or so they've found
hard to explain
the darkened cuts
suicidal mind
out of touch
braclets hide
the newly dried blood
mind is lost
and stuck in a flood
friends contemplating suicide
just trying it on
never to see again
the rising sun
face held up to the sky
thinking about
the next time I'll get high
thanks dad, for that one
its what you taught me
its where I run
my comfort level is in the blade
only thing that'll make my pain fade
Copyright ©
screwup
... [
2004-10-07 10:57:26]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: SI(C)NESS
(User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:10:23 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow very sad poem. I like the way your rymning pattern is. Great write |
|
|
Re: SI(C)NESS
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 12:22:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This explains some of what I'm going through. I need to be high all the time...cuz when I'm sober I get depressed and the only way I feel better is when I cut myself. It's such a release when you hold back as many tears as you can hold...so you end up bleeding tears. Great write.
Krystle |
|
|
Re: SI(C)NESS
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:34:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| another excellent write. you cant run away from whats inside, you cant escape it either. |
|
|
Re: SI(C)NESS
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cindy359 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 04:42:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So much pain here. Very strong don't give in I am sure your not alone. Life gets hard like that..talk to someone. Really well done.
Take care. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
