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forever lost
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 12:26:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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whispers in my head,
pictures in my mind,
cold, dark memories,
beginning to unwind.
lurking in the shadows,
of these dusty corridors,
down endless staircases,
leading to my core.
searing winds,
and icy flames,
figures roam,
through burning rain.
forever searching,
wandering lost,
never stopping,
at any cost.
moving in the shadows,
through these silent halls,
following the voices,
and there soft sweet calls...
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quilted_rag_doll
... [
2004-10-07 12:26:54]
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Re: forever lost
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 01:10:58 PM AEST
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Amazing, bloody amazin
Bravo
*applauds*
10 out of 5
x x x *runs off to read more* |
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Re: forever lost
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by Vicxy on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:15:41 PM AEST
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| I love it, great job keeping the form of it too |
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Re: forever lost
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by Mekare on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:26:00 PM AEST
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| loved it |
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Re: forever lost
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:23:05 PM AEST
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| ::standing ovation:: brilliant write. |
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