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Unless...
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 02:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i will live my life in poverty and alone, in pain my hoped, my dreams all will be shattered shattered glass, unless... I tear after the stars
i will live my life all alone and desperation, lonelieness my love, my tenderness all will be unshared unshared emotions, unless... i stop doging cupid's arrows
i will live my life in fear and shame, in disgust my pride, my confidence all will be wasted wasted trash, unless... i embrace courage
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Re: Unless...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:15:22 PM AEST (User
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very good. i liked the message in this. fear is one of the great inhibiters. it has its good points and bad points to it, but i hope you embrace the courage to let most of it go. |
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