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Why I love you
Contributed by
mandocammando
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:00:32 PM in AEST
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Your eyes are as blue
As the ocean waters on a hot July day
Your touch is as soft
As fine silk hanging in my closet
Your kiss is as sweet as sugar
You thought you could ever tast
Your kindness is like a road
That goes on for miles and miles like it could never end
Your secirity is like a thousand guards
Keeping me safe at all times
Your bright warm smile makes me feel better
Than I ever thought possible when I'm feeling blue
These are just some of the many reasons
Of why I love you
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mandocammando
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2004-10-07 19:00:32]
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Re: Why I love you
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:23:03 PM AEST
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Very happy, smiley, beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Why I love you
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by Yousef on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:32:14 PM AEST
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| Good effort, not very well written but good in general, I liked the last part "These are just some of the many reasons, Of why I love you", Keep writing and the next ones will be much better. |
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Re: Why I love you
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by JoseyJ on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 08:14:46 AM AEST
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| Other than the occasional spelling errors, i think it's well written and quite sweet :) keep it up |
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