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Helpless
Contributed by
hollie85
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Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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At the back of a pub with no parents nearby,
a group of teenagers drank and got high.
More people arrived and some they did hate,
but they never expected one of them could rape.
The night went on and we all were drunk,
one of my friends went for a walk with this hunk.
An hour passed by and we started to worry,
but it was way to late to be saying sorry.
In ran my friend with tears in her eyes,
I realised what had happened and wished I could die.
She ran into the toilet and locked the door,
she didnt want to face the horror anymore.
My anger started rising and became out of control,
how could someone do this to such a beautiful soul.
I ran into the kitchen and grabbed a knife,
but someone wouldnt let me take his life.
Two years on I sit here and write,
remembering so well that horrible night.
Wishing I could have been there to stop the crime,
nevertheless, I wasnt and so I sit here and rhyme.
Copyright ©
hollie85
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2002-11-14 04:30:00]
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Re: Helpless
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:01:22 AM AEST
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| Hollie, I feel for you and your friend, what a terrible thing to happen at such a young age, I hope the guy was caught, make sure your friend goes to counseling, It won't heal everything but I think it will help, I wish you the best and hold eachother close, you will be in my prayers, |
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Re: Helpless
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:12:56 AM AEST
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| I know this was real hard on your friend & you,you really need to talk to someone about this! Boys like that just don't realize how much this hurts & really don't care! God bless both of you! Christina |
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Re: Helpless
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by nightrider on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:26:49 AM AEST
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| wow! you did a really great job of putting your emotions into this. i can realte to this first hand, unfortunately. i hope that you and she can help eachother out with feelings on the subject. great write! |
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Re: Helpless
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:40:31 AM AEST
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This gave me chillbumps so bad
This is awful that someone would do
such a thing like this, My heart goes
out to you and her both. Thanks
for sharing this
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Helpless
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:12:07 AM AEST
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This must have been so difficult for both you and your friend.. I can oly imagine the pain and horror of that night..not to mention the aftermath... I can only hope that you both can find a way to heal without too many scars..
Great write. (((((Hugs)))))
Jenni |
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Re: Helpless
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 01:22:55 AM AEST
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| I hope the person who inflicted such pain upon your friend was punished, and that your friend has been able to find a way to cope with what has happened, Its good to know that you were a friend to her when she needed you most. It was a good write, I'm sorry it was written in true emotion no one deserves that pain. |
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