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Alone
Contributed by
Dreamer_Of_Death
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:04:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dark, Fear, Confusion, Hurt
To be alone makes me feel like dirt
People walk on my feelings without a second look
They read the emotions on my face like a book
They laugh and scorn and point and say
She's just another loser, let's chase her away
Only I know how I feel inside
I just want to run and hide
I can't take the pain and their terrible laughter
So I run away further and faster
Into a bottomless pit of despair
It comforts me when I am there
No one will laugh or make fun
I won't be seeing anyone
And then I realize what I've done
And I cry
I am alone, I wonder why?
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Dreamer_Of_Death
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2004-10-08 03:04:17]
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Re: Alone
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:49:01 AM AEST
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| wow, this is awesome! |
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Re: Alone
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by Kevin on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:12:45 AM AEST
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That was a really good write, I'm very impressed. Just so you know, I have felt the exact same way, but things have gotten better. I hope they get better for you.
-Kevin |
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Re: Alone
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by Archie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:25:38 AM AEST
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| This was a great poem because you made it easy for people to get in touch with what you feel. I wrote a poem like that; I have not posted it as of yet. I don't know if I ever will. The emotions from feeling alone are often so strong that we do not notice people offering their friendship to us. |
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Re: Alone
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by Yousef on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:47:55 AM AEST
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| I liked this one more than the other one, I liked the way you pushed your self to lonliness and then when you found yourself alone you wondered why?! The last thing I want to say is "You can run but you just can't hide so face your fears, move on and leave your past behind". |
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Re: Alone
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by lovesucks on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:38:12 AM AEST
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I know how that can feel and you described it well. Good job
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Re: Alone
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by pixie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:51:41 AM AEST
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wow,great expression and feeling used here,
pixie xx |
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Re: Alone
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by Always on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:24:40 PM AEST
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| Deep and to close to truth......*s* |
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Re: Alone
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by screwup on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:02:17 PM AEST
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very deep and emotional poem... great write.
~screwup |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:05:23 AM AEST
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| you know that i too have been through this, and it had not gotten better untill recent times when I can to accept just what it is that I am. I am here for you, you know that, but I feel it must be said yet again. |
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