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trust
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:35:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Its funny to look back
On who we used to be
Take time to reminisce
About the old you and me
Laugh about the fights
Talk about the tears
Smile at the good times
Remember all those years
But lets keep the past
Confined in memories for good
No reliving what has been
Well move on as we should
Because although we can look back
With smiles and jaded eyes
The truth is buried deep
Encompassed with forgotten lies
Weve treaded through murky waters
Weve been down that road
And god knows I cant go back
And relive whats already been told
A long hard way, you and I have come
Hell, we barely survived
And It is hard to even recollect
All the times our loves been revived
So now we look to the future
With open hearts and weary minds
preparing for a new kind of love
that will be true till the end of our time
no fights that last for days
no regrets and miserable lies
I want to see only truth
In each others eyes
I love you more than life
And look what weve created
So lets look forward to many good times
And dismiss all that we have hated
We will make it forever
Just the three (four) of us
As long as we stay together
And always in love put trust
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-10-08 08:35:52]
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Re: trust
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:40:05 AM AEST
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Great poem, full of hope. Inspiring and beautiful.
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Re: trust
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:35:12 AM AEST
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Good luck on your journey in your new life.Hope everything turns out the way you want it to
Steve |
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Re: trust
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by Dorian on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:30:39 PM AEST
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verry nice poem in deed, best of luck in your new
quest Dorian : ) |
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Re: trust
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by Kie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:45:57 PM AEST
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Bravo!
Your outlook on life is not only positive it is happy.
You did a great job with your poem.
Kie |
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Re: trust
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by inoc on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:39:52 PM AEST
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all the best for the four of you
a brilliant poem
cheers!~ |
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Re: trust
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:53:02 AM AEST
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I love this poem. It comes from the heart and that is what makes a good poet. Good luck with everything and I hope you stay happy!
~Me~ |
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