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Light
Contributed by
scott23432
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Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you noticed the light? it is shining there in the corner, looking down on you.. it looks through you. .. It sees your imperfection that you hide from the world.. It sees the things you do in the dark.. It sees the love you have and the hate you bottle up.. the light that shines from the corner, steady, unwavering and pure. It knows you better that you know your self.. Beware, for the light never sleeps and neither should you, for the light may strike at any time and take what you have.. and judge what you have done in the dark and in the sight of all. The light knows all and judges over all.. Beware, for your time may be soon or long waiting..
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Re: Light
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:50:03 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this one
Beautiful write, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Light
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:28:36 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem - its really powerful and the extended metaphor (although i'm unsure what its for) is really effective. well done xxx |
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Re: Light
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Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:28:38 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem - its really powerful and the extended metaphor (although i'm unsure what its for) is really effective. well done xxx |
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Re: Light
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:05:54 AM AEST
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| amazing work |
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