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Guiding light.
Contributed by
backstreetdreamer
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:05:11 PM in AEST
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I have sailed many leagues and seen many lands, with golden pagodas and ocean kissed sands. Through storms and through doldrums, through wave and through foam with my star in the distance, always guiding me home. As we sailed through the night I could see far away, the star that I followed seemed to twinkle and say "I will guide you to safety of that do not fear, back to the arms of the one you hold dear!" It got ever brighter as we neared the land, it seemed to be saying "Just give me your hand." The great ocean goddess her white arm held high, was holding my star as it flashed in the sky. We entered the harbour at last we were free, to give thanks to the light that shone ever bright, and brought us all home from the sea!
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Re: Guiding light.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:09:14 PM AEST (User
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Pretty cool. |
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Re: Guiding light.
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:35:10 AM AEST (User
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Another beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Guiding light.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:11:52 PM AEST (User
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This nautical feel was so soothing.
I could read a hundred of them!
Great poem!
~Breezy |
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