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When
Contributed by
ElatedNBliss
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:28:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When does love deserve to die
when hungry babes are left to cry
when families crack apart and break
when suicide is one's soul to take
when one dies and it's not from old age
when kids kill kids, lost in a blind rage
when daddy cheats amd mama leaves
when your drunk and your given the keys
when planes crash into buildings, bursting with flames
when your making love and call out someone elses name
when in a world where a models figure is what you should want to be
when thousands of insecure teens wonder what is wrong with me
when a misunderstood person is left alone without a friend
when someone who is just starting to live, their life has to end
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ElatedNBliss
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2004-10-08 16:28:37]
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Re: When
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:57:53 PM AEST
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| Pretty sad. Life sucks sometimes. |
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Re: When
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:42:12 PM AEST
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This is amazing, and so sad, and so true. I love it.
Katie |
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Re: When
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:28:22 AM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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