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-glass limbs-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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if i could mend a broken heart
if i could get a smile on your face
i'd do anything
i'd do everything
lift you with broken arms
i fell victim to your subtle charms
i'll say every thing on my mind
never met someone so kind
i'd do anything
to have you in broken arms
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Re: -glass limbs-
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:43:28 PM AEST
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This is very unique and different. And short and to the point. I like it a lot!
Katie |
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Re: -glass limbs-
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:46:38 PM AEST
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| Very sweet and concise poem. Hope it works. Good luck! |
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Re: -glass limbs-
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by Yousef on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:08:30 PM AEST
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| Good one, different than the usual which makes it some how unique, I really liked the last part "i'd do anything, to have you in broken arms", Keep it up |
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Re: -glass limbs-
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:01:44 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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Re: -glass limbs-
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:52:32 PM AEST
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Well...
you certainly have a way with words..
5/5 |
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