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All Alone
Contributed by
immortal_pain
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:25:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Silently I whisper to myself,
Trying to ease all pain,
Licking my wounds,
Tending my broken heart,
Each hand beholds the pain of all,
And each arm serves as a handle,
Countless days of sleepless nights,
Oh the torture,
Nothing much worse then the burden of everything,
Nothing better then to have no caress,
And in the end you realize....
Were all alone.
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2004-10-08 21:25:45]
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Re: All Alone
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:35:52 PM AEST
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Very moving and heart tearing poem! Very well done.
Laurie |
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Re: All Alone
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by tony3_000 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:38:00 PM AEST
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| Reminds me of one of my friend. I always find it amazing how in a bus with 20 people, we can feel just as alone if we have no friends to talk to. Good piece. |
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Re: All Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:41:00 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: All Alone
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by mylastwords on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:36:58 AM AEST
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Beautiful write...i know what its like to be so alone...i hope everything works out for you...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: All Alone
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:18:00 AM AEST
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| ooh, i love it! |
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Re: All Alone
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by immortal_pain on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:42:29 AM AEST
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| thanks you guys those comments really made m smile :) |
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Re: All Alone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:02:20 PM AEST
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| sounds a lot like me |
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