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Bruised
Contributed by
silent_tears
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:24:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Since you asked,
I'll tell you how I'm feeling,
Here I am, an open book, unmasked....
Going through this is hard, but I'm dealing.
You used me, like you swore
You wouldn't.
You took it away, made me feel like a whore,
And after that you couldn't
Stick around, because now I'm just old news.
The only thing I have to show
For it are these bruises.
So to you I say "bravo".
You bruised my heart,
You bruised my mind.
You called me your sweetheart,
And then left me behind.
I loved you unconditionally,
I gave you all I had.
But then you left me lonely,
Lonely and so sad.
You ended up
With everything,
And you left me all shookup.
Now all I have is the aching
You bruised my skin,
You bruised my soul,
You bruised me from within
And now I'm left with nothing but this pistole.
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silent_tears
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2004-10-08 22:24:11]
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Re: Bruised
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by shanarah on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:33:11 PM AEST
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deeply wounded, I can feel your pain, Im sorry. There is hope just hang in there, you will see!! great write. take care,
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Re: Bruised
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by pixie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:23:32 AM AEST
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a very pained write, deep and full of raw emotion, I am also sorry for your pain, I hope for you in time it will heal and you can smile again,
takecare
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Re: Bruised
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:53:36 PM AEST
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Painfully emotional and powerful write. Very well done!
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