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completely alone and somewhat insane
Contributed by
monophobic
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:43:24 PM in AEST
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nothing is beautiful and/exciting
i've gotten numb to the point
where i can't remember how to spell words
maybe somewhere along the path of life
my mind somehow slipped away from me
only to leave me-completely alone and somewhat insane
i turn to the red rose to see the light
yet someone took the sun away from the rose
and now its a black rose
and i can only see the darkness overcoming the light
and secreting thinking this is a wonder
so cold and empty-i think no one truly cares
and care is what i do the least
so don't count on me being your friend ill only pretend
but in this stage of life sucks i find the comfort
that wasn't around ever before
so i turn to the black rose and place it
on my grave i have already dug
because i'm only wasting time until the end
the end of the nothing my life is
the beginning of the hell i'll doomed to be in
someone save me cause i hate life like this
in this paranoid state i realize i NEED the change
but change can't see the beautiful that it could bring
so im stuck in this place-this state of living-and this hell i am doomed
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Re: completely alone and somewhat insane
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:22:43 PM AEST
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