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Our love
Contributed by
SlimStaple
on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:01:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Our love always seemed like a tear stained cloth
Dipped in holy water and hung to dry.
However, the tears never truly went away
And the holy water just dripped off and left.
Our love could blow up the world.
We were unstoppable and no one wanted to see us go.
Changing the world was something we were used to
However, we never truly understood.
Our love shaped the lives of hundreds.
We went through the world like a tornado
And left things ruined and broken after we left.
We changed the whole damn world
And ourselves more then anything.
Our love was so always in danger
Like a glass of water sitting on the edge of a table.
But we were sure nothing would knock it over.
But we, like little kids positive the cup could stand, were wrong.
Our love fell and shattered into a million pieces
Of hate filled words that could not be taken back.
It broke apart and left gashes on our hearts
That a thousand stitches could not close up.
Our love could not blow up the world,
Our love could not rewrite history.
Our love could not even last a year
But it could change a world.
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SlimStaple
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Re: Our love
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:28:02 PM AEST
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| wow. I like the last stanza the best. Describes something that just ended for me. |
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Re: Our love
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:37:10 PM AEST
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| really, really meaningful and touching..the line about a glass of water sitting on the edge of a table..it was very visual. I loved that. I could see it falling in slow motion.. |
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Re: Our love
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by moon_light on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:24:02 AM AEST
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| how sweet. if people stood up it could cange the world. |
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