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Giving up
Contributed by
shrunkin_fool34142316
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 03:54:20 PM in AEST
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If I told you I gave up
Woould it happen today
Or would I wait
Just to see you another day
I'm sick of people letting you down
I'm sorry I had to be on the list
I'm sick of it
This miseary
I'm giving up
That's a fact
But will I do it tonight
Or wait
Just to see you another day
I would give it all up
All for you
Everything
Just for you babe
It wouldn't matter
Matter what I had to do
Just for two minutes with you
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2004-10-09 15:54:20]
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Re: Giving up
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 04:56:30 PM AEST
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An emotional write that reflects deep devotion to another; but definitely not enough care and devotion to self.
Hope you care enough about you
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Re: Giving up
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by tony3_000 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:13:05 PM AEST
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| Strong friendship is a beautiful thing so cherish it, and nurture it carefully for we all have way too few friends ... so replacing a true friend is near to impossible. |
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Re: Giving up
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:27:09 AM AEST
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| as i always say, theres a price to everything. sadly...=/ |
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