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My Life
Contributed by
tony3_000
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Why?
Why do I wake,
To a world so fake?
I cannot live for even a day,
I must stay home, all alone.
My studies, a magnificent holiday.
Finals are coming and my mind is drowning.
Three ulcers forming to remind me,
If I forget one variable, if I drop one negative sign!
There goes my average, there goes my ranking.
Two digits that classify us into herds like animals.
Must study to do good, must out rank those I love to succeed.
What a life worth living, fulfilling the criteria
To impress nameless people.
All a while,
the thoughts fly.
The angel of death,
A knife,
To end my life.
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tony3_000
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2004-10-09 17:08:09]
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Re: My Life
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:00:28 AM AEST
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Re: My Life
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:53:25 PM AEST
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Thats Deep, so much feelings, wow, Our school can be like that sometimes like when you wrote
Two digits that classify us into herds like animals.
That jus makes me think of our school lol, well Very good write, I enjoyed reading it
~ Great Write ~ |
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