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Flower in the frost
Contributed by
ElatedNBliss
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm a frost bitten flower
tangled in weeds
choked by thorns
always getting stepped on
or cut down
I am the flower
that couldn't bloom.
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ElatedNBliss
... [
2004-10-09 18:05:14]
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Re: Flower in the frost
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:34:54 PM AEST
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This is really unique and creative! I love it, I can relate to the feeling. Hang in there. Your title is really catching, great work!
Katie |
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Re: Flower in the frost
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:39:15 PM AEST
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| not yet at least anyway =] |
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Re: Flower in the frost
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by valentine on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:54:22 PM AEST
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You have expressed so much emotion in so little words . . beautiful and mesmeric.
~*~ Valentine ~*~
.....Rose. |
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