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The Voyuer
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:38:45 PM in AEST
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oops
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Uh oh
here she comes again
wearing that dress
yes
and the sensations never end,
The Voyuer
in ah zone
Invisible
so he remains unknown
silently
watching her in action
never revealing the attraction.
He is mesmerised
listening
as she talks
when she walks
he can only sigh
and follows her with his eyes....
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-10-09 20:38:45]
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Re: The Voyuer
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:44:35 PM AEST
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| Scared me..I have a poem by the same name..but mine is about a sea lion. lol. Great write. |
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Re: The Voyuer
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:59:21 PM AEST
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Good write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Voyuer
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:24:52 AM AEST
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| enjoyable read here you should make a follow up to it I like the way this flowedMichelle |
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Re: The Voyuer
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:15:48 AM AEST
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| A great interpretation of the word 'crush' Nice work. Nicely written |
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