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trails of blood
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:01:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The tears that fell down
From my eyes
Are filled with blood
From anger inside
In my hand
The knife I hold
Is like the anger
You unfold
The trails of blood
Is all I can find
Its the only thing
To ease my mind
I cant do noting
Right I see
So let me die
Just kill me
Why wont the knife
Go deep enuf
What will it take
To lose your love
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tractorbabe
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2004-10-09 22:01:56]
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Re: trails of blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:41:44 PM AEST
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| you expressed your talent very well. =] |
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Re: trails of blood
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by Rxqueen on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:34:30 AM AEST
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| I have only been on this site a few days and there have been a lot of poems about self abuse to ease the pain. I loved your poem, maybe becasue I can realte to it all too well. It was simple but so deep. Many cannot understand, but I do and I aplaud you for your honesty. |
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Re: trails of blood
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by screwup on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:28:57 AM AEST
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this was a breath taking poem... short and some what dark... you did a great job expressing your emotions, keep up the good work.
~screwup |
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