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Prisoner in Shackles
Contributed by
tman
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:14:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im a prisoner in shackles taken to the chamber/ No one guessed but I could have named her/ as an accomplice to arrest her body/ then throw in my cell to lay with me till death.
But still the sins Ive understood/ are too late to do me any good/ Id repent now but Im wishing for the end/ to come like a ship and sail me away from these lonesome harbors.
So strap me in and lean me back/ and inject my veins with poison/ that hurts less than a kiss from lips of lies/ or our last exchange that ended in tears.
My broken heart has softened now/ as I escape into the darkness higher than ever/ you could save me but you choose to hide/ behind a translucent screen to watch my light dim.
And with the last glimpse of shutting eyes/ I turn to see your silhouette/ and remember every inch of your face/ and the memories of lost love that will haunt my eternal sleep.
My murdered body lays victim to the cruelty of love/ as they carry me off into another room/ You have won your freedom at my loss of life/ now you can finally sleep softly.
Copyright ©
tman
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2004-10-09 22:14:35]
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Re: Prisoner in Shackles
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by Archie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:00:07 AM AEST
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| Your metaphor of death and lost love is striking. I can really relate to this, but not on the level of lost love, I have not had my first love yet. |
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Re: Prisoner in Shackles
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by sweettalkingwoman on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:40:21 AM AEST
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I feel so moved by this, such a wonderful use of words
thankyou x |
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Re: Prisoner in Shackles
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by tman on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:00:48 PM AEST
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| thanks for your comments, they are really helping me move on |
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Re: Prisoner in Shackles
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:56:21 PM AEST
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| incredible, striking beautiful words |
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