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fallen
Contributed by
ll
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:02:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Catch me as I fall
Tell me your there and that its over
But no ones there and I continue to fall
This truth push me into madness
I know I can stop the pain
If I drive it all away
As I go deeper
I see an image of you above
Dont turn away
My words to you have blown away
Though they are still screaming your name
Dont close your eyes
Dont turn out the light
Im frightened by what I see
Immobilized by my fears
Im turning blind by my tears
But I can still be saved
Time have seem to pass by
So soon, I am now at the bottom
I stood up seeing
Angels at my feet
Whispering voices in my ear
Death before my eyes
Im getting more scared
As I start to realize
Ive been falling to meet my end
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2004-10-09 23:02:59]
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Re: fallen
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:26:56 PM AEST
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A lot of this seems to be Evanecense's work. I'd like to see what you have to say, I'm sure you're a talented writer, just work a little more with your own words.
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Re: fallen
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:36:45 PM AEST
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| amazing write. =] |
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Re: fallen
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:34:16 AM AEST
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| nice, but i kno u tend 2 use others work... |
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Re: fallen
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by apcfan on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:50:25 PM AEST
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don't put stuff up if it isn't yours. This only makes you look bad. I'm sure you can post you're work and if you can just leave poetry to those who can write
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