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Then The Moon Is Made To Be Frail
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:13:55 AM in AEST
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We go out nights
To look at the sky and wonder
To kiss under the stars and moon
And to let our souls dance in the atmosphere
And dream while we are awake
I mostly sit and look at you
Yours is the most beautiful view
When I kiss you the stars fade away
And the moon hides its face
It can’t stand not being the most loved
It can’t stand no being kissed by me
It hides its face until the next night
And hopes that we are not out side
Because you dim the moons pale light
And fill the stars with jealousy
So if the moon on its throne can be made to feel that way
Then The Moon Is Made To Be Frail
And to bow down to you
My love with skin so pale
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Re: Then The Moon Is Made To Be Frail
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:50:42 AM AEST
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precious and lovely,
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Re: Then The Moon Is Made To Be Frail
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by mylastwords on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:08:59 AM AEST
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beautiful as always...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: Then The Moon Is Made To Be Frail
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:52:37 PM AEST
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| great write. but what of the sun? |
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Re: Then The Moon Is Made To Be Frail
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 07:52:56 PM AEST
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| This is very good, it is sad that so few people have read it. The way you gave the moon emotions was very wonderful. |
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