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FATE
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:17:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Here i go up the stairs to Heaven to await my fate to Hell. ILL be the one Satan fears, the one who will torchur u for all eternity see u soon
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Re: FATE
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by Rxqueen on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:52:21 PM AEST
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| kind of creepy. You should go on. Make it longer. There is more potential then just a line. |
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Re: FATE
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by karmen on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:34:13 PM AEST
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| thats good but u really could add a lot more... u most likly have more feelings about that one subject rather then just the one line... its already good just add more to it then one line and it will be great |
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Re: FATE
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by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:31:44 AM AEST
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short, but i really liked it!
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Re: FATE
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by shadowmoon on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 10:00:59 AM AEST
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this ones kinda short did you ever finish it? it dosent seam finished.
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