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When roses bleed
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Crushed, alone, lying on the floor,
Not wanted any longer, not wanted anymore,
It once held a love so brilliant and bright,
That it took away the very strongest of sight,
Dying, fading, never to be seen again,
The only feeling emitted would be pain,
Darkening, blackening, shriveling up,
All it wanted was to represent pure love,
Now deserted without any need,
This is what happens when roses bleed.
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Re: When roses bleed
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:45:28 PM AEST
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very good, great flow,
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Re: When roses bleed
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:52:16 PM AEST
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Great analogy here..I enjoyed this immensely..
Jenni |
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Re: When roses bleed
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by screwup on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:55:45 PM AEST
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what a sad poem... you are very talented writter indeed... loved it a lot.
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Re: When roses bleed
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:57:18 PM AEST
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What a fabulous poem great flow and excellently written
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