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Missing You...Terribly
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:43:21 PM in AEST
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These days we've been apart
My heart has been broken, shattered
Into a million pieces
Longing to see you
To hold you, to feel you
This is what happens
To a hopeless romantic
I'm dying inside, and always crying
Dry my eyes, kiss away my tears
I miss you so much
I love you so dearly
So much that there is hardly any room left
For anything else...anyone else
And if you leave me alone
That enormous, loving part of my heart
Would go with you
Please, don't give up on us
This is love like I've never felt
Wonderful
Dearest, I'm missing you terribly
I love you
Hope you love me too
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2004-10-10 19:43:21]
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Re: Missing You...Terribly
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:09:37 PM AEST
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A bit sad but good writing.
Hang tuff.
luv, uggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Missing You...Terribly
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by shadowmoon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:11:10 PM AEST
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i have felt this way before as well. i know how you feel. it gets better and your heart moves on. best wishes, good wright.
love
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Re: Missing You...Terribly
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by mylastwords on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:34:32 AM AEST
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this is beautiful...i know how you feel...i have wished the same thing many a time...no one could have put in to better words though...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: Missing You...Terribly
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:03:33 PM AEST
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| your writing is so mature for your age. i am always astounded when you post something like this, which most of your poetry. you left in me in tears buddy. |
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Re: Missing You...Terribly
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 12:46:26 AM AEST
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(lol! what an interesting way to get feedback!)
This piece... is all too relatable to too far many. And this...
I love you so dearly
So much that there is hardly any room left
For anything else...anyone else
... is absolutely heartbreakingly.
Left aching,
SNM
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