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Letterman Jacket
Contributed by
AsILayDying
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:25:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Oh what a colorful night
youve painted for me
I remember that November
walking down the narrow streets
The scene was brilliant and
everything you sent for me
The smell of cold air
it had no effect over me
You know, I almost forgot
how much I hated the snow
You can never escape what
what holds fast to you
Ill burn our bridges
all through the winter
Making good for the fire
that will keep me warm
Ill burn our bridges
all through the winter
Making good for the fire
that will keep me warm
We were like rival schools
with the worst of intentions
Rival schools with blood
stains on our letterman jackets
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AsILayDying
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2004-10-11 01:25:48]
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Re: Letterman Jacket
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by Ronald on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:32:25 AM AEST
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| This poem is cool!! Any way I can hear the song? This is a cool poem! |
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Re: Letterman Jacket
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:33:46 AM AEST
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Very giood write. Bet it sounds awesome.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Letterman Jacket
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:42:09 AM AEST
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That's a great song...
really liked this part :
'I’ll burn our bridges
all through the winter
Making good for the fire
that will keep me warm' |
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Re: Letterman Jacket
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:37:10 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, with a flowing magistry, and of fellings unveiled in a textured tapistry of poetic emotions, nicely written and composed. |
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Re: Letterman Jacket
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:43:19 AM AEST
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Brilliantly written, good song. Thanks for sharing.
Janexx |
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Re: Letterman Jacket
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:21:20 PM AEST
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I like the imagery in this poem it was
beautiful. I like your name as well. I like the
band u got it from... or perhaps it was the
book. In any case good poem/song.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Letterman Jacket
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:23:17 PM AEST
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| Not your best, but still a good read. |
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