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Bittersweet Vale
Contributed by
silverscent
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:36:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The shaded sky at sunset
Beams a lone silken poppy
Rubric love of tinted blood
Amends the red rose copy
A red-letter flush skin deep
Below the forsworn waters
Crisp geranium mantle
Shaming the red-eyed slaughters
Lusting moonshine on the wind
Imposing crimson nonsense
The rusty firewater rage
Passions a humble suspense
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2004-10-11 07:36:09]
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Re: Bittersweet Vale
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:39:56 AM AEST
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You fit the topic for this one...
'Lusting moonshine on the wind' - I take it you're not talking about the alcoholic kind? heh.
Thanks for rhyming here. I like vivid rhymes in mystery. Oh, and -
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Re: Bittersweet Vale
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by thumper on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:55:24 AM AEST
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I really liked this. It gave me a sense of peace. Vivid imagery. Nice. :o)
Welcome to YPDC. It's a great place to hang out!
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Re: Bittersweet Vale
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:58:14 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!!!!!!!! I do hope you stay away and share more of your work with us!
This is lovely.... it made my mind wander off somewhere. Thanks for sharing this!
Again, welcome! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work,
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Re: Bittersweet Vale
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:17:44 AM AEST
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Very interesting write. Love how the words just flow into one another and yet there is such a sense of sadness mixed with joy---fits the title.
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