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Longing
Contributed by
apoetswhisper
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:47:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Longing
The endless waiting
The hours, the days
Forever sitting here, where loneliness prevails
Alone with only silence to fear
Days of darkness seen through unlit eyes
Confides my heart, my soul, my mind
Emptiness fills me, love has left me!
Still here waiting, with only silent whispers to comfort me
Always waiting, forever waiting!
Never taking my turn, just failing
Longing for love, yet to love
Still loves time stands, lost in limbos eyes
Forever longing, always waiting
Love is my wanting
Love is my haunting
Love is my longing
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Re: Longing
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:00:15 AM AEST
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wow, this was wonderful, I hope that you dont have to long for love for much longer, may it find you,
pixie xx |
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Re: Longing
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by LouisaMontagu on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:23:29 AM AEST
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well done!! an enjoyable n dreamy write
a pleasure to endure
Louisa xx |
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Re: Longing
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by a_bear on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:16:39 AM AEST
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| awww. such a hungry poem.. great though. |
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Re: Longing
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by brew on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:59:57 PM AEST
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| You have a certain flair to letting the one, who I hope reads this you really know what the true meaning is.......ppl do forget.~ |
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Re: Longing
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:01:16 PM AEST
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your longing enpowers this write so beautiful yet sad
Michelle |
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Re: Longing
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:35:54 PM AEST
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ahhhh A very well concieved write. I love the lines you used. Sad,yet very well done.
Larry |
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