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Roads of Broken Dreams
Contributed by
kammie
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:35:12 PM in AEST
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Black rose, not red ,
Full of hate ,
I walk roads ,
Of broken dreams,
Only me,
My shadow walks with me ,
Lost hopes fill souls ,
Shallow heart bleeds ,
Drip, drip ,
Black tears ,
But what do I care?
As I walk the roads ,
Of broken dreams ,
What of lost hopes ,
And blackened souls?
They and their shadows walk ,
The roads of broken dreams ,
Black tears , souls , roads....
But what do we care?
Me and my shadow ,
Walk as one ,
We just count ,
Our broken dreams ,
And we pray to find ,
Our lost hopes .............
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kammie
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2004-10-11 13:35:12]
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Re: Roads of Broken Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:41:14 PM AEST
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Great write.
You expressa sort of hopeless resolution.
I hope you find your lost hopes...
Perhaps inside? |
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Re: Roads of Broken Dreams
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:57:41 PM AEST
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sad write, great expression,
pixie xx |
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Re: Roads of Broken Dreams
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:28:05 PM AEST
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| I know how u feel, im going down that road of broken dreams now!!! |
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