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God, who is he?
Contributed by
devil_child
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The man is
speaking
i'm sitting in the crowd
with 100 people
but soon
they all
disappear
only I am left
the man is talking
to me
God, who is he?
I tune out
but then
something
draws me back
the man is still talking
to me
God, who is he?
did you say
he loves me
did you say
he cares for me
no
wait
stop
I can't
let him in
no one
must see my
secrets
the man is still talking
to me
he says that God
will forgive me
he says that God
loves me
mabye I should
try this and
see
where it leads
suddenly
i'm
sitting in the crowd again
with 100 people
the man is still talking
to me
God, who is he?
a father
a savior
a friend
I guess, now I know
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Re: God, who is he?
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:31:43 PM AEST
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| This is a great write. It is true, God is a Father, a Savior, and a Friend. Great write. |
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Re: God, who is he?
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:55:44 PM AEST
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| good write. =] |
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Re: God, who is he?
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:43:52 AM AEST
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Wonderful write.
God never sees a crowd--but individuals--and when He speaks to you, it's something you can ignore, or run from, but never miss.
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Re: God, who is he?
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by Lovingangel4u on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:38:52 PM AEST
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Im glad you know. A lovely searching poem. He already knows, sees and loves.
~Hugs~
Lovingangel4u
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Re: God, who is he?
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by all4jesus_teen on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:28:10 AM AEST
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Great poem:)
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Re: God, who is he?
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by Stellar on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:11:09 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. I think many people question their faith at times, me being one of them. But try as you might to tune Him out, He always finds a way back in. Great write!
Take care and God bless : ) |
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