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Your World
Contributed by
Tinkkerbelle
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Your world is so new, so different, so confusing to me.
Is this where you spend your life?
I walk into this unknown place to find myself surrounded by darkness, depression, anger, frustration, confusion, and more.
Is this what you live in?
I also find myself stumbling upon drugs and drug addicts, alcohol and alcoholics, confused and suicidal people.
These are your friends?
As I keep venturing through, I find you here.
Why did you let me get lost in this place?
But you're not the person I thought I knew; you're all drugged up and totally wasted.
Is this your way of dealing?
You and your friends sit in a dark corner in this dark world while talking and writing suicide poems.
Is this your hobby?
Violence thrives here I noticed.
This is a normal part of your life?
You recruit people to your world.
Why?
I know you don't want to be all alone,
But you need to come out, people should never go in.
I came to your world once.
Once was more than enough.
Why didn't you share your world with me before?
Maybe I could have helped you some more.
Now you're lost, blind, and trapped in here.
You cannot escape.
So this is your world,
This ugly world of darkness?
How do you survive here?
Why do you keep coming back?
I want to help,
But you won't let me.
But just let me warn you,
I can't help you until you leave this place because I sure as hell am not coming back.
MW 2001
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Tinkkerbelle
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Re: Your World
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by Rxqueen on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:54:04 PM AEST
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"You recruit people to your world.
Why?
I know you don't want to be all alone,
But you need to come out, people should never go in. "
Misery loves company. I used to have a friend, Jeremy, and we used to do coke together. Whenever I tried to decline he would buy it for me, a lot. Soon we were going evertday and he would just buy it for me everytime. I always wondered why he was being so nice? Because he would feel like a drug addict if he was alone. He wanted company in his misery. I liked your poem. Though all drug addicts aren't so dark, some are the people you would never expect. I worked at Friendly's, a family restraunt, and would be all hopped up everyday for 11 months and NO ONE ever even knew... sad.
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Re: Your World
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:22:16 PM AEST
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| Its my world too, except for the drug part, i havent done that yet!!! |
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Re: Your World
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:40:57 PM AEST
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| great write. nice message. |
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Re: Your World
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:20:01 AM AEST
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Great poem...keep writing!
Krystle |
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