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Pain
Contributed by
frozensuicide
on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Pain is like an awful wound,
one, which can't heal by itself.
Pain is being driven from life.
Tormented, and deprived,
you find loneliness.
Nothing can help to seize your feelings.
Pain is a word people often take for granted.
a little scratch to a cut in the knee.
But when pain really comes,
you feel your life is over.
Death is the most pain someone can feel.
Being shot, or even stabbed,
is a minor feeling of pain,
that will soon vanish like it was long ago.
but pain from death will stay forever until you let go.
Pain will make you hurt.
But if you learn pain,
you can hide it,
but it always conquers.
No matter what you do. But,
if you let it be, it will be easy.
Dont let it control you,
but don't not let it in.
if you stay away from pain,
and it catches up with you,
it will hurt more than life its self.
Tears will fall and your heart will freeze.
Cause pain, is stronger than you.
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frozensuicide
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2002-11-15 05:30:00]
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Re: Pain
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by nightrider on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:58:47 AM AEST
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wow! this is great. it is rather deep, and it has alot of emotion! great write! |
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Re: Pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:23:54 AM AEST
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| this reads more like a lecture than it does a poem. sixth line, i would think the word ease would be more appropriate. |
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