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Engaged by Night
Contributed by
shanarah
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:25:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Aquainted with the silence of night
intricate emotions intice me to write
fumbling wits cry out for relief
threading out thoughts are my belief
freedom attaches to endless space
seeking desires in my personal space
engraved words, my mind starts to mend
night saunters by, we will meet again
Copyright ©
shanarah
... [
2004-10-12 04:25:14]
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Re: Engaged by Night
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by Row on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:46:16 AM AEST
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| very nice... short and easy to get through but still shows meaning. Well done, i like |
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Re: Engaged by Night
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:23:51 AM AEST
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a great insomniac write, good stuff,
pixie xx |
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Re: Engaged by Night
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:01:29 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, and pasionately composed, an enjoyable poem. |
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Re: Engaged by Night
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:54:50 AM AEST
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| A wonderfully worded poem |
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Re: Engaged by Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:07:51 AM AEST
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very lovely!
It flows very well. I bet you would do well at longer pieces or stories.
Great job and good luck to you! |
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Re: Engaged by Night
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:14:56 PM AEST
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Nice poem.
Spazzo |
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Re: Engaged by Night
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 02:46:10 PM AEST
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Ah, if only I could write something meaningful in eight lines...This gives me a clear picture of someone sitting alone, dim light, pen-in-hand. Reminds me very much of my own nights, as well. Very nicely done, I liked this a lot.
Truly,
-Dan |
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