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ThRoW iT aLL aWaY...
Contributed by
Delusions
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:40:27 AM in AEST
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What the hell is wrong with you?
You think Im so stupid
That I wouldnt know
That you betrayed me
That I wouldnt feel
The knife thrust into my back
A secret shared
And meant to be kept
But you threw the trust away
Not Caring
Whose lives you ruined
Only Caring
That you looked cool
Its you that played the fool though
Its you who threw it all away
I was the one whose shoulder you could cry on
I was the one who you could rely on
But soon I will no longer exist to you
I will fade away
Because you have done this too many times
And you no longer deserve to be forgiven...
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Delusions
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2004-10-12 06:40:27]
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Re: ThRoW iT aLL aWaY...
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by Lovingangel4u on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:46:50 AM AEST
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Very Hurtful. Good write. They will be missing the special friend you are.
Take Care
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Re: ThRoW iT aLL aWaY...
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:52:47 AM AEST
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Such anger, yet to be betrayed by someone you thought a close friend, then it is anger deserved, i have known such and lost friends through their pervert sense of fun, ruining others lives, it sux and I feel for your agony, I hope in time you heal and find friends that are pure and trustful, Awesome write, very emotional and with such strength,
Powerfully written.
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Re: ThRoW iT aLL aWaY...
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:13:45 AM AEST
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heya huni...
yeah u tell them!! don't u wanna kinda print this poem out and stick it on their windshield or sumthing to show how much anger u've got towards them! i know i want to wid some of mine.....once again i totally love this poem...keep it up and know that u always hav me as a friend.
mwa
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Re: ThRoW iT aLL aWaY...
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by brew on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:30:54 AM AEST
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| True friends, are really hard to come by.......but when you do find one, they and you should respect anything that has been shared. Sorry,to see the pain you write of. They will see one day what they have done, and feel the same. |
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