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Out of the blue
Contributed by
jonteD
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:17:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Along the street I was bobbing along,
Whistling to mesen a jolly song,
When me espied a whoa pretty lass,
With the Holy Bible, off to early mass.
Out of the blue, from nowhere, out of the blue.
Her smile spun me rapid round one eighty,
Me a lonely man with no girl lately,
A sideways glance and she blushed as girls do,
My name is Jag, and mine is Lulu.
Out of the blue, from nowhere, out of the blue.
She took me to church, I took her to the park,
We spent all day talking, until it became dark,
By her hand I took her home and there we kissed,
All that lonely time I had spent, this is what I had missed.
Out of the blue, from nowhere, there goes my heart.
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jonteD
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2004-10-12 15:17:26]
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Re: Out of the blue
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by brew on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:10:54 PM AEST
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| WOW........................if all could with love be so easy.~! Enlighten write |
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Re: Out of the blue
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:26:10 PM AEST
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| Be careful given away your heart so fast...in the dark and in the park...you might not remember sucking slow when you kiss..but you go fast in the dark and in the park.. |
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Re: Out of the blue
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:16:02 PM AEST
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Lol....Hey Jon..did Marlene take you to church?? I'll have to have to talk with that grrl......
Hugs
Little Lady... |
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Re: Out of the blue
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by Jrtoews on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:20:29 PM AEST
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| i really like the creative words you used and it flowed really well i wanted to immediatly pick up a guitar and write music for it, to me thats what makes a good poem good job |
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